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Critique my work!(Mark this forum as read)
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New Replies Icon Flight of the Shaman / Muriel Gray Geoff Widders 
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New Replies Icon Day 57 oneslymonkey 
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New Replies Icon Boxing Day. oneslymonkey 
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New Replies Icon Hello, I'm new.. & slighty nervous. ElleJ 
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New Replies Icon Chapter one "Antigone"
My first chapter to my first book
Johnlocke1 
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New Replies Icon Poem
Choosing Life.
Kerri Kat 
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New Replies Icon Book?
The start of something, I hope. Strong Language.
Kerri Kat 
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New Replies Icon Poem
remembering sneking out of the house as a teenager.
Kerri Kat 
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New Replies Icon Returning to word doodling, critique would be much appreciated
Some swearing and mild sexual references
Chivera 
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New Replies Icon Poem/ Back Roads
Please Critique.
Kerri Kat 
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New Replies Icon Couple of short stories, any critique much appreciated! evenflow 
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New Replies Icon Memoirs Of A Son
poem
Jakster 
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New Replies Icon Getting Started
Aborted attempts
Llylia 
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New Replies Icon a few short bits and pieces. comments welcome! littlefeet 
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New Replies Icon The Genome Kunstler
Short Story
Austen Brauker 
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New Replies Icon Trying to be a writer MJS 
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New Replies Icon Greasepaint and sunshine
Haunted seaside pier (please be kind to me as first post)
Aura 
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New Replies Icon Hello I'm a Newbie
A Few Pieces
Hayley1 
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New Replies Icon New to creative writing, My attempts, what do you think? Simpso 
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New Replies Icon New Here, Please critique this story
Fantasy genre :)
Sharg 
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New Replies Icon short stories - sincere insanity Scoundrel 
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New Replies Icon New Forum Member looking for Feedback
The following contains language some may find offensive.
Cheesy 
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New Replies Icon Rusty writer comes out of long retirement...
Short story needs critiquing
rainegirl 
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New Replies Icon Chapter one - children's novel
I've had another bash at an opening chapter. It is a first draft,
Jae 
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New Replies Icon Kidnap St Jimmy 
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New Replies Icon First few pages of my novel. Phil_Morland 
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New Replies Icon No Title As Of Yet St Jimmy 
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New Replies Icon My first proper go at a novel, please critique!
chapter one
lornipop 
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New Replies Icon looking for feedback funboy 
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New Replies Icon what does this tell you
let ne know
AMrose 
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New Replies Icon Short freewrite story
A story I freewrote. maybe to be expanded
fireballs 
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Hot Topic (New) Icon Hi Everyone - Is this any good?
I'm new here, would like some constructive critisism please :)
Vixie 
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New Replies Icon The Rumour Mill - first (maybe last?) attempt! KPaige 
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New Replies Icon Benson's Blog
My creative content is unsuccessful
jennyb 
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New Replies Icon A Matter of Flaws
this is a short poem I have written..feedback would be appreciated
maverickmuse 
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New Replies Icon Glass boxes
Experimental SF
Raymondo 
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New Replies Icon Birds of Paradise
Life as an Expat Wife: Comments on writing welcomed
Maisie 
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New Replies Icon am i wasting my time ?
I'd appreciate some feedback if possible
trigg78 
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New Replies Icon What do you think of the first two chapters of my book Ethereal Visite Etherealvisiters 
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New Replies Icon Blue Eyes elainefelicity 
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New Replies Icon A Prison of Flesh (a short story)
feedback please :)
mightybuddha 
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New Replies Icon A Day Long Ago (A Poem)
Feedback would be greatly appreciated :)
mightybuddha 
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New Replies Icon Untitled
Short Story
Jess221 
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New Replies Icon Book Trailer! Madeline 
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New Replies Icon You Can’t Tell A Hen By The Colour Of Its Comb
fox raids henhouse
doug 
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New Replies Icon WEIRD NEWS (unfinished)
This is a news proggramme i wrote but havnt finished it yet.
robotsausage 
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New Replies Icon Opening Paragraph
A Comp Entry From Last Year
Mika 
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New Replies Icon Writing blog zeitgeist 
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New Replies Icon Opener for a book
Joining the Navy
matelot123 
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New Replies Icon First page. Ever
First page of first story I've ever tried writing.
tom_b 
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